Tuesday, February 1, 2011

Don't Bully


12 comments:

Anonymous said...

Nice! It really shows the message with the devil and angel!

~Daphne

Anonymous said...

It has a good point because if you're mean to people they'll only see the mean side of you and they'll hate you when you may have a really nice side
~Sage

Anonymous said...

i like it but i think that you faces could yous a little expeshin


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jacob

Anonymous said...

I like your setting and i could rilly under stad what you are saying

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scott

Anonymous said...

Your comic has a good moral in the story and the bully learns a good leson in the end.
Sean

Anonymous said...

This was a really good comic but, we think just a few of the speech bubbles were misplaced. I think you easily showed how Ryo shouldn't bully and that helped understand the main idea of this comic. good job! :D
- Tracy and Julia

Anonymous said...

good comic it relly got the idea thogh but the acting cvould use some work callum

Anonymous said...

hi guys its cameron good job i liked it my favorite part is when ryo sais to william no nerds aloud, i dont realy get how in about 5 min it goes from "hey nerd" to " now he has lots of friends". but besides that its great

Anonymous said...

I like your comic! Everything is really good until you get to the second last box, Williams line was way too long.

Luca

Anonymous said...

I like that you did the devil and angel, but next time maybe do the angel and devil in marker so we can see it better.
Annika

Anonymous said...

We like the face and body expressions. it made it very realistic looking.
Vita and Josephine

Anonymous said...

this is a great comic but i think you could have a little more expresion in your faces
Nadia